A Rainy Day

We splashed in puddles, danced in rain,
and laughed; though soaking wet, we knew
that come what may, each day's to live -
so seize the day, and don't be blue!

written 6th September for Sara's A Rainy Day contest - inspired by Picture Two
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your work. I know you don't mind the rain so this was a breeze for you. Congrats on your win. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 5:34 PM
well done. I noticed seeing examples of this unusual form, that even proverbs work as poems!! You always do well with short forms. Are you ok?? I have not seen mail from you lately.
Sietesantos Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 10:05 AM
So lovely and inspirational! A winner for sure! Hugs. Pandita
Ashley Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Oh, I just love the pure joy and optimism of this beautiful and rhythmic poem, Jack. How these verses sparkle under your poetic enchantment! A FAV. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Michael Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:05 AM
Good advice Jack...that's what I'll do...All the best
Messina Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 7:58 AM
You made a rainy day sound so wonderful. Yes, we must live, day by day and cherish the moments. Lovely write, Jack...Much enjoyed!
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