A Rainy Day

We splashed in puddles, danced in rain, and laughed; though soaking wet, we knew that come what may, each day's to live - so seize the day, and don't be blue! written 6th September for Sara's A Rainy Day contest - inspired by Picture Two

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2018 9:04:00 AM

Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your work. I know you don't mind the rain so this was a breeze for you. Congrats on your win. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2018 5:34:00 PM

well done. I noticed seeing examples of this unusual form, that even proverbs work as poems!! You always do well with short forms. Are you ok?? I have not seen mail from you lately.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/7/2018 10:05:00 AM

So lovely and inspirational! A winner for sure! Hugs. Pandita

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/6/2018 10:18:00 AM

Oh, I just love the pure joy and optimism of this beautiful and rhythmic poem, Jack. How these verses sparkle under your poetic enchantment! A FAV. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/6/2018 8:05:00 AM

Good advice Jack...that's what I'll do...All the best

Charles Messina

Date: 9/6/2018 7:58:00 AM

You made a rainy day sound so wonderful. Yes, we must live, day by day and cherish the moments. Lovely write, Jack...Much enjoyed!