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A Rainy Afternoon

we intended to walk in the sun ~ made love when it started to rain



August 25, 2020
Silent One's Monoku Plans Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2020 at 2:31 PM

Hmmm, maybe it would still be nice!! (a soft rain would be romantic!) Congrats.

Jenna Logan

September 14, 2020 at 10:57 PM

Yes it would be. Thanks, Andrea.

Gershon Wolf

August 29, 2020 at 8:52 PM

Sounds like the sun was still shining to me... Congrats on your win in the contest, Jenna! :) gw

Jenna Logan

September 14, 2020 at 10:57 PM

haha Thanks, GW.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 29, 2020 at 1:10 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Jenna :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan

September 14, 2020 at 10:56 PM

Thanks so much.

Sam Kauffman

August 29, 2020 at 11:29 AM

Plan B sounds like a good option, Jenna! Congratulations on your win!

Jenna Logan

September 14, 2020 at 10:56 PM

Oh yes, it does. Thanks, Sam.

Eve Roper

August 29, 2020 at 10:47 AM

Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Jenna . Congratulations on your win.

Jenna Logan

September 14, 2020 at 10:55 PM

Thanks, Eve.

Kim Rodrigues

August 29, 2020 at 6:36 AM

Congratulations!

Jenna Logan

September 14, 2020 at 10:55 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Krish Radhakrishna

August 29, 2020 at 4:41 AM

Great imagination! Rain evokes such romantic passion in man and animals! Peacock dance is a prime example! Congrats on your win!

Jenna Logan

August 29, 2020 at 5:56 AM

It really does, Krish. Thanks so much.

Silent One

August 29, 2020 at 4:38 AM

A great alternative exercise lol

Jenna Logan

August 29, 2020 at 5:55 AM

Most definitely.

John Gondolf

August 29, 2020 at 3:55 AM

Back with congrats, Jenna, making love is always a winner. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan

August 29, 2020 at 4:22 AM

Thank you very much, John.

Silent One

August 29, 2020 at 2:59 AM

always great in bad weather... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Jenna Logan

August 29, 2020 at 4:21 AM

Always great in any weather. Thank you for the honor of placing in your monoku contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 27, 2020 at 10:40 AM

- ... and forget about the rain ... beautiful written, Jenna :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan

August 29, 2020 at 4:20 AM

Thanks so much for your wish of luck, Anne-Lise.

Panagiota Romios

August 25, 2020 at 4:09 PM

Perfet,..Passion in the rain..,dreamy verse. Panagiota xx

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2020 at 4:21 PM

Thank you so much, Pangie.

John Gondolf

August 25, 2020 at 3:34 PM

What a wonderful way to spend an afternoon with the tender touch of passion. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2020 at 4:21 PM

Hi John, you're so right about it being a wonderful way to spend a rainy...anytime.

Mike Bayles

August 25, 2020 at 2:35 PM

Very nice poem. I like the twist in the middle of it.

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2020 at 4:20 PM

Thank you very much, Mike.

Gordon Mcconnell

August 25, 2020 at 12:01 PM

Hey Jenna, what a lovely way to spend the afternoon indeed who needs the sun anyway! Hugs and blessings, Gordon

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2020 at 4:20 PM

I agree completely, Gordon. Thanks for reading me.

Kim Rodrigues

August 25, 2020 at 9:35 AM

Love it!

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2020 at 4:20 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Heidi Sands

August 25, 2020 at 8:30 AM

Great one Jenna :)

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2020 at 8:39 AM

Thanks, Heidi.

Alwi Shatry

August 25, 2020 at 7:20 AM

What a way to enjoy the rain! You avoided a great deal of sweat and enjoyed each other with the soothing sounds of rain.

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2020 at 8:39 AM

I couldn't think of a better to spend the afternoon, than with someone you love. Thank you, Alwi.

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