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A Rainy Afternoon

we intended to walk in the sun ~ made love when it started to rain August 25, 2020 Silent One's Monoku Plans Contest

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Date: 8/30/2020 2:31:00 PM
Hmmm, maybe it would still be nice!! (a soft rain would be romantic!) Congrats.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:57:00 PM
Yes it would be. Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 8/29/2020 8:52:00 PM
Sounds like the sun was still shining to me... Congrats on your win in the contest, Jenna! :) gw
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:57:00 PM
haha Thanks, GW.
Date: 8/29/2020 1:10:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning line, Jenna :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:56:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 8/29/2020 11:29:00 AM
Plan B sounds like a good option, Jenna! Congratulations on your win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:56:00 PM
Oh yes, it does. Thanks, Sam.
Date: 8/29/2020 10:47:00 AM
Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Jenna . Congratulations on your win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:55:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 8/29/2020 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:55:00 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 8/29/2020 4:41:00 AM
Great imagination! Rain evokes such romantic passion in man and animals! Peacock dance is a prime example! Congrats on your win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2020 5:56:00 AM
It really does, Krish. Thanks so much.
Date: 8/29/2020 4:38:00 AM
A great alternative exercise lol
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2020 5:55:00 AM
Most definitely.
Date: 8/29/2020 3:55:00 AM
Back with congrats, Jenna, making love is always a winner. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2020 4:22:00 AM
Thank you very much, John.
Date: 8/29/2020 2:59:00 AM
always great in bad weather... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2020 4:21:00 AM
Always great in any weather. Thank you for the honor of placing in your monoku contest.
Date: 8/27/2020 10:40:00 AM
- ... and forget about the rain ... beautiful written, Jenna :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2020 4:20:00 AM
Thanks so much for your wish of luck, Anne-Lise.
Date: 8/25/2020 4:09:00 PM
Perfet,..Passion in the rain..,dreamy verse. Panagiota xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pangie.
Date: 8/25/2020 3:34:00 PM
What a wonderful way to spend an afternoon with the tender touch of passion. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:21:00 PM
Hi John, you're so right about it being a wonderful way to spend a rainy...anytime.
Date: 8/25/2020 2:35:00 PM
Very nice poem. I like the twist in the middle of it.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Mike.
Date: 8/25/2020 12:01:00 PM
Hey Jenna, what a lovely way to spend the afternoon indeed who needs the sun anyway! Hugs and blessings, Gordon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:20:00 PM
I agree completely, Gordon. Thanks for reading me.
Date: 8/25/2020 9:35:00 AM
Love it!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:20:00 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 8/25/2020 8:30:00 AM
Great one Jenna :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi.
Date: 8/25/2020 7:20:00 AM
What a way to enjoy the rain! You avoided a great deal of sweat and enjoyed each other with the soothing sounds of rain.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 8:39:00 AM
I couldn't think of a better to spend the afternoon, than with someone you love. Thank you, Alwi.

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