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A Rainy Afternoon

we intended to walk in the sun ~ made love when it started to rain



August 25, 2020
Silent One's Monoku Plans Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2020 2:31:00 PM

Hmmm, maybe it would still be nice!! (a soft rain would be romantic!) Congrats.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:57:00 PM

Yes it would be. Thanks, Andrea.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/29/2020 8:52:00 PM

Sounds like the sun was still shining to me... Congrats on your win in the contest, Jenna! :) gw

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:57:00 PM

haha Thanks, GW.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2020 1:10:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Jenna :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:56:00 PM

Thanks so much.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/29/2020 11:29:00 AM

Plan B sounds like a good option, Jenna! Congratulations on your win!

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:56:00 PM

Oh yes, it does. Thanks, Sam.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/29/2020 10:47:00 AM

Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Jenna . Congratulations on your win.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:55:00 PM

Thanks, Eve.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/29/2020 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations!

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/14/2020 10:55:00 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/29/2020 4:41:00 AM

Great imagination! Rain evokes such romantic passion in man and animals! Peacock dance is a prime example! Congrats on your win!

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2020 5:56:00 AM

It really does, Krish. Thanks so much.

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 4:38:00 AM

A great alternative exercise lol

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2020 5:55:00 AM

Most definitely.

John Gondolf

Date: 8/29/2020 3:55:00 AM

Back with congrats, Jenna, making love is always a winner. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2020 4:22:00 AM

Thank you very much, John.

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 2:59:00 AM

always great in bad weather... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2020 4:21:00 AM

Always great in any weather. Thank you for the honor of placing in your monoku contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 10:40:00 AM

- ... and forget about the rain ... beautiful written, Jenna :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2020 4:20:00 AM

Thanks so much for your wish of luck, Anne-Lise.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/25/2020 4:09:00 PM

Perfet,..Passion in the rain..,dreamy verse. Panagiota xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:21:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pangie.

John Gondolf

Date: 8/25/2020 3:34:00 PM

What a wonderful way to spend an afternoon with the tender touch of passion. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:21:00 PM

Hi John, you're so right about it being a wonderful way to spend a rainy...anytime.

Mike Bayles

Date: 8/25/2020 2:35:00 PM

Very nice poem. I like the twist in the middle of it.

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:20:00 PM

Thank you very much, Mike.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/25/2020 12:01:00 PM

Hey Jenna, what a lovely way to spend the afternoon indeed who needs the sun anyway! Hugs and blessings, Gordon

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:20:00 PM

I agree completely, Gordon. Thanks for reading me.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/25/2020 9:35:00 AM

Love it!

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 4:20:00 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/25/2020 8:30:00 AM

Great one Jenna :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 8:39:00 AM

Thanks, Heidi.

Alwi Shatry

Date: 8/25/2020 7:20:00 AM

What a way to enjoy the rain! You avoided a great deal of sweat and enjoyed each other with the soothing sounds of rain.

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/25/2020 8:39:00 AM

I couldn't think of a better to spend the afternoon, than with someone you love. Thank you, Alwi.

A Rainy Afternoon

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