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A Race Car Sandwich

I'm going to eat a race car sandwich. It will run down my gullet, hard and fast. It will clean out my tummy, and drive past my gas. It will clean me out, right? I will eat a race car sandwich at the next red light.

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/2/2018 8:20:00 PM

I never thought about that but, it's possible, I think!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2018 10:01:00 PM

And a fun write for me, which was the good part.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/29/2018 11:18:00 PM

eat & clean the gluttonous tummy but on race ! /// interesting rhyme

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/30/2018 7:01:00 AM

I thought it was a fun rhyme for children, and I have always wanted to be a race car who owns her own fire truck.