A Quickie

Endless ocean,
Life in motion,
How to go through...
There will be no trouble,
If I ride on a bubble.



Archana Garg
19/06/2014

lifeoceani do not know?

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Funom Makama

April 4, 2015 at 8:17 AM

A very very beautiful poem. Definitely a 7!

Robert Johnson

December 9, 2014 at 8:02 AM

The trick they say, is to go your own way. Just don't suffocate in your own bubble. For if your 80 feet under and you burst and you blunder, your trouble is certain to double. :) Nice job Archana. Peace. :)