A Quick Thought

The fool
if I catch him will
be me

This Annoyance
in soup server error is pain in
ones ****

The arrogant
never return compliment
what wrong

the wit
I often use is misunderstood
go figure

fat cat
has more than he needs his
hands greedy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Konos Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 10:30 PM
Good One! Thanks for Posting....
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Hey, long time no see, jack. What a series of humor. I especially liked second one. Today it is giving me error on COMMENTS. I cannot get to my comments so I am wandering about just clicking on anybody's name. haha. Luv, Andrea
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 9:03 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Andrea for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack....yes the soup seems to have a few bugs, guess we need bug spray!!
Agtani Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 9:20 PM
Witty senryu Jack. It is a pleasure to read your poems. Dalila
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady dalila for you kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack
Sweetheart Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 12:30 PM
wow Jack.. a true masterpiece of truth be told luv... sentiments agreed with in this piece of excellent poetry... luv the expressions at the end of each set.. awesome..luv..
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 3:14 PM
Thank you lovely Lady for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack
Horne Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 10:21 AM
LOL, a very witty collection of senryus, Jack
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 3:15 PM
Thank you mate for your kind comments, much apprecitated....with love.......old Jack
Onclaud Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 2:19 PM
i want to laugh but that server error gives me headaches, arrgh!.. crisp piece here, jack! :) huggs, nette
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 4:55 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Nette for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love....old Jack
Rams Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 10:08 PM
the arrogant we do not need, it is the ones who sit and read, those are the ones who give us the feed.
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 10:58 PM
Thank you kind sir Louis for your kind comments, much appreciated......your friend...old Jack
Wesley Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 8:02 PM
Enjoyed the fun in this one Jack but you are no fool! Take care.
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 9:38 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Lady Elizabeth for your kind comments, much appreciated, with love.....old Jack
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Got some chuckles...Enjoyed..Your visit to my work was uplifting..Sara
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 6:55 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Sara for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack....glad you got some chuckles guess my wit isn't completely misunderstood....lol
Sivey Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 5:14 PM
Great work! I really liked the verse about the "soup server error" being a "pain in ones arse," definitely true, I hate that when it happens! Thanks for sharing this write!!
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 6:56 PM
Thank you Sir Russell for your kind comments, much appreciated....your mate Jack
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