A Quick Life

At the start of this journey Naked,crying,now vulnerable What is this from my place of comfort? Ouch! what did you do. There she,is,do presume 5 years do pass.I know what i am 10 15 and 20.Do i really know who i am? What is this? I see reborn again. not from me I do believe my legacy will live on. Why do i not remember? Is this all a dream? No i believe not. These are my final thought's. I pass the sign here your journey ends.

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Terence Alexander Cupit

Date: 12/5/2014 7:13:00 AM

It is sara.my first poems written long ago. I have over 100 i will be written in the next week maybe 5 of these.Any reason a poem about world issues are ignored???

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2014 6:45:00 AM

These are my final thought's. I pass the sign here your journey ends. I wonder if this is thoughts about life written in the last days of life?..Interesting work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/24/2014 3:01:00 PM

Interesting sentiments. The language used reminds me of deep, fragmented thoughts. Very nicely expressed! Always, Laura

Terence Alexander Cupit
Date: 11/24/2014 3:14:00 PM

Thank you,really appreciated.