A Quick Life

At the start of this journey
Naked,crying,now vulnerable

What is this from my place of comfort?

Ouch! what did you do. There she,is,do presume

5 years do pass.I know what i am

10 15 and 20.Do i really know who i am?

What is this? I see reborn again. not from me

I do believe my legacy will live on. Why do i not remember?

Is this all a dream? No i believe not.

These are my final thought's. I pass the sign

here your journey ends.
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Cupit Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 7:13 AM
It is sara.my first poems written long ago. I have over 100 i will be written in the next week maybe 5 of these.Any reason a poem about world issues are ignored???
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 6:45 AM
These are my final thought's. I pass the sign here your journey ends. I wonder if this is thoughts about life written in the last days of life?..Interesting work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Breidenthal Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 3:01 PM
Interesting sentiments. The language used reminds me of deep, fragmented thoughts. Very nicely expressed! Always, Laura
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November 24, 2014 at 3:14 PM
Thank you,really appreciated.
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