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A Question of Mankind

The Lord created a beautiful world , Which was meant to be graceful. Peace was to be the objective , And the idea was wonderful . But , there was a problem... He had a question about humans , "Would there be peace , or would there be grief ?? " But he ignored that question , And created humans And animals and plants And what all not to mention . Man had the power to think and to do. And took advantage of that. He created a different world , a whole new picture to paint for you . Did he do this for need , did he do this for greed..? man wants too much , too fast... because he wants this world to last !

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Date: 2/23/2015 2:27:00 AM
Quite an intuitive write here Saanvi, which I see has had a win..' pleasure to read today.!
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Date: 3/23/2014 8:24:00 AM
Ironic that in our attempt to improve on God's work we sew the seeds of our own destruction. Congrats on your win and thought provoking piece.
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Date: 3/20/2014 1:35:00 AM
SAANVI, , Congrats! Enjoyed your winning poem. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:42:00 PM
Hi Saanvi:).... Congratulations, in Nathan's contest... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 1:10:00 PM
Beautifully penned Saanyl... Verlena
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Date: 3/19/2014 7:27:00 AM
Wonderful poetry and congrats on the fine win, saanvi
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Date: 1/31/2014 9:27:00 AM
SAANVI, :) thank you for the wonderful winning poem. Enjoy your day. Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 1/28/2014 3:19:00 PM
SAANVI, CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT
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Date: 1/5/2014 2:53:00 AM
Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win, Saanvi
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Date: 1/3/2014 9:36:00 PM
Saanvi, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. Stop by and read my latest when you have time, I will miss you:( have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA"
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Date: 1/1/2014 3:14:00 AM
Yes the contradictions are in there indeed Saaani, well done on this winner!!
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Date: 12/28/2013 1:31:00 AM
very wise...congratulations on your win...I enjoyed reading. SuZ
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Date: 12/27/2013 9:05:00 PM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win,Saanvi
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Date: 12/27/2013 1:42:00 AM
Sasnvi.. CONGRATULATIONS -thank you for supporting my contest. Wishing you the best when it comes to Health and Happiness, this coming New Year! xox...Linda your friend...
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Date: 12/25/2013 1:11:00 AM
yes, much is done for greed in this world, and I am glad to see you tonight and find this poem I had somehow missed among all your recent ones. A merry Christmas to you too, my friend. I don't really care what I get for Xmas. It's just me and hubbie tomorrow and my daughter's little family. All I really want is for hubbie to get a job!!
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:58:00 AM
Great poem and great point. So much truth in what you say, truth so many miss yet there it is in black and white for all to see. Well done! Thank You also for your comment.
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Date: 12/2/2013 6:07:00 PM
nice & thanx for visiting mine!
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Date: 12/2/2013 11:17:00 AM
Yes so true! I likd d whole fab poem and d endin stanza summed it up soo great n nice. Take care.
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