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A Puppy Dog Plays

a puppy dog plays
                              on a green grassy pond's shore
                                    mother dog's near by 


                                      puppy sees flying
                                butterfly from plant to plant 
                                     chases to catch it 

                                     many times it failed
                               mother dog was watching this
                                   asks to come back vaw

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/15/2016 3:44:00 PM

A 7 for this concise, adorable winning poem, BL! Janice

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/15/2016 4:16:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes and 7. Loved always, bl

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/15/2016 2:11:00 AM

I could clearly picture the puppy playing, as I read through your verse.... Congrats BL, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/15/2016 11:15:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes with beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2016 4:29:00 PM

Big congrats on your fine win, my friend!

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/14/2016 9:14:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/13/2016 10:37:00 AM

Ahh......I do love this sweet poem, BL... and of course I am smiling thinking of the sight of this puppy at play !! Congrats to you!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/15/2016 11:14:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes with beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/13/2016 12:59:00 AM

BL, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for the support. Stop by and enjoy the sanity of my newest Blog "In Red's Silent Fury." Always & Forever WUV ~LINDA~

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/13/2016 10:30:00 AM

Thanks my lovely *friend for giving placement of my poem in the contest. Certainly i will visit to your blog. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 10:13:00 PM

Clever and sweet my friend... Love the write, BL.. , Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/26/2015 8:09:00 AM

Thanks my lovely *friend for your appreciation. Wish you Happy Merry Christmas and to all your family members. Loved always,bl