A Punch of Haiku

HAIKU

in the afternoon
his rendezvous with her
and her shadow too
~~~
standing in the park
behind a little cabin
two shadows kissing
~~~
on your way windstorm
bring dust and leaves and paper
and letters for me
~~~
a sudden whirlwind
the poems i wrote outdoors
delivered to heaven
~~~
the almond tree
blossoms falling falling
the child still swinging
~~~
in the olive grove
singing aloud all night long
with the cicadas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 23, 2016 at 8:48 PM
Nizar, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 1, 2016 at 1:21 PM
NIZAR, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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July 10, 2015 at 9:19 AM
WOW! This is just a beautiful string of wonderful haiku! BRAVO and a 7! Pandita
Sartawi Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Dear Pandita: Deep Gratitude!
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 12:02 AM
simply stunning string of haiku:-) hugs jan xx 7 x
Sartawi Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 4:42 AM
I am glad you like it dear Jan
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