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a punch of haiku

HAIKU in the afternoon his rendezvous with her and her shadow too ~~~ standing in the park behind a little cabin two shadows kissing ~~~ on your way windstorm bring dust and leaves and paper and letters for me ~~~ a sudden whirlwind the poems i wrote outdoors delivered to heaven ~~~ the almond tree blossoms falling falling the child still swinging ~~~ in the olive grove singing aloud all night long with the cicadas

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Date: 2/23/2016 8:48:00 PM
Nizar, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 1:21:00 PM
NIZAR, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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Date: 7/10/2015 9:19:00 AM
WOW! This is just a beautiful string of wonderful haiku! BRAVO and a 7! Pandita
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Nizar Sartawi
Date: 7/10/2015 3:00:00 PM
Dear Pandita: Deep Gratitude!
Date: 7/10/2015 12:02:00 AM
simply stunning string of haiku:-) hugs jan xx 7 x
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Nizar Sartawi
Date: 7/10/2015 4:42:00 AM
I am glad you like it dear Jan