A Puff

Clouds floating by in azure skies
pushed here and there by fickle breezes
playing tag and forming magical shapes
as they dance in harmony across the skies

Little puffs of white giving shelter
from the blazing sun and uniting into
towering pillions that appear to prop up
great mansions and glittering silvery castles

Streaked with enchanting reds, yellows and oranges 
with a little mauve tinge that soon purples
as dusk slowly starts to fall cloaking them
then behold the starry night as day now ends 

Now the clouds darken seemingly ominous
as they obscure the moon from earthly sight
with a back drop of glittering stars blanketing the skies
at last the moon soars into view and peace returns once more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/6/2014 7:23:00 PM
a very descriptive one, Shadow. I loved the sound of that one line about the towering pillions. I don't think I ever saw that word before!! Nice one to read as I go off for the night!!
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Date: 8/6/2014 4:09:00 PM
I enjoyed your various pictures of clouds as they float through different times of day and night. Quite artistic! well done. // paul
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Date: 8/6/2014 11:09:00 AM
That's wonderful imagery Shadow! Awesome work !
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Date: 8/6/2014 10:37:00 AM
how picturesque can this get, shadow... wonderfully penned; i like this!.. huggs
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Date: 8/6/2014 9:36:00 AM
Nice picture you have drawn of the celestial bodies with fine imagery, shadow
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Date: 8/6/2014 8:44:00 AM
- Shadow, long time since I've seen you - Enjoy reading this beautiful poem! - A colorful and positive write - Thank you! - All the best to you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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