A Profound Gratitude

Having been on the brink of death like a wretch so vile,
hope and light suddenly vanished;
and soon isolation and despair would have been mine....
if a caring angel had not appeared.


Thankful for having known a profound gratitude
that made me reach an unknown altitude;
before nothing reflected reality...
love didn't exist through memory.


Nobody noticed me being in a trance
as moods turned desperate and intense;
outside they were many smiling faces...
lovers and friends exchanging embraces. 


Nothing feels greater than a profound gratitude;
that angel came down and changed my attitude
towards life and people who stared and wondered...
why I seemed so unwilling to share their world.


Entered in Michael J. Falotico's contest
" The Right Time "
Written by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 6, 2011 at 11:40 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it Andrew. Love, Carol
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