David Mohn Poet Verse

A Primal Light

                   sage wisps
              of candent swirls
    dance upon a once dark scroll-
an austere wall thought uninspired
         pirouettes with wonder


               Nette Onclaud
  LIGHT A PENSEE Poetry Contest
                 27 Jul 2026

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Sara Kendrick July 30, 2026 at 1:36 PM David way to go with this winning entry. I am delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations to you. Sara K.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 30, 2026 at 11:44 AM - I read this as a top winning poem, David .... CONGRATULATIONS :) - hugs

Alison A Smith July 27, 2026 at 5:42 PM Perfect imagery.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 27, 2026 at 12:17 PM - A unique "out of the box" entry, David ... really like this... good luck in the contest :) - hugs