A Prelude To Winter

Bundled in mittens and ****,
A scarf on my face to my nose,
My breath coming out in a puff
And icicles under my toes – 
It’s winter, and I’m about froze!


for Andrea's Catch-Phrase contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Johnson Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 4:48 PM
Congrats on the win. Enjoyed.
Ober Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 9:04 AM
I LOVE this one! It makes me so nostalgic - brings back memories of being a kid, all bundled up and playing in the snow for hours. Fabulous job :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 2:02 AM
Belated congratulations on your winning spot Ilene xx
Zerbst Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 9:31 PM
This is great! I wish it was that cold here. We mostly have rain this year. It looks like you stole a winning place in Andrea's contest; you deserved it! Grace and peace to you, Isaiah
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 7:05 PM
this was so cute, Ilene. congrats to you for your win in my contest.
Guzzi Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 6:24 PM
LOL loved the nose & froze!!! Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love
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