A Precious Gift

A little girl came wandering out She was dressed up to the nines Like a mung bean munching hippy But her father claimed she was divine. She glowed and preened, with a smile of joy In her clothes of different hues With a little gleam of confidence Dealt from Dads’ loves expressive views. There’s many people living now That have seen or been that child New endeavours can bring infancy Given growth when someone’s smiled. Encouragement is a precious gift Helping recipients conquer fear Motivation aids improvement Because purpose lives when someone cares. Remember hugs don’t always come from arms Warm words they can embrace Our choice is that we use them right There’s reward from a fabulous smiling face.

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Date: 1/10/2016 10:28:00 AM
I am rewarding you right now with a fabulous smile upon my face. This poem is perfect for exploring and explaining the content, from line to line a truth is clearly and poetically spelled out. I love it .... 7 ... Fav ... CayCay (Yes, I remembered to click that pesky 7 before validating - I am improving)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/18/2016 3:52:00 PM
Aw, thanks, Woodsy!
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Mark Woods
Date: 1/10/2016 11:16:00 PM
Thank you. As one of the Queens of Poetry Soup, I truly think you live the mantra of this poem every day you visit here. People like yourself, S1, Nette, Jan, Olive and so so many more have guaranteed the poetry keeps flowing here. : )
Date: 1/10/2016 6:29:00 AM
clever write Mark, encouragement and motivation are really a gift
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Mark Woods
Date: 1/10/2016 11:34:00 PM
Why thank you White Sage, and indeed they are a gift. I know some people will rise from rejection but many more will stand from encouragement.
Date: 1/10/2016 1:51:00 AM
I agree! Not just for children, but all of us. Am a living example of this...This rings with such positivity, Mark. Best! :-)
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Mark Woods
Date: 1/10/2016 2:15:00 AM
I read a comment recently that said people were guilty of praising averageness, I personally don't see that as a guilt but as positive trait when used for the right reasons. Thats what triggered the muse. Sometimes I am still a child, (not because I am a man lol) but we all explore something new sometimes which is like being a kid again. : )
Date: 1/9/2016 6:49:00 PM
Lovely poem my dear , full of wisdom and beautiful imagery , great write, hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/9/2016 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Dalia, I'm not overly confident that I have wisdom I just see things in a different light some days. : )
Date: 1/9/2016 6:25:00 PM
G'day Mark ... could never have said it better myself Mark. Wise words indeed - Lindsay
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Mark Woods
Date: 1/9/2016 6:35:00 PM
I know of a wonderful story about a budding builder in the 60's in Christchurch. He was about to throw in the towel when he received some warm advice and a helping hand. He went on to become one of the biggest building companies in the province.
Date: 1/9/2016 6:12:00 PM
Such wise words and wonderful imagery Mark - I love the line about the mung bean munching hippy and the final stanza us oh so true:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2016 6:23:00 PM
lol I just had that final stanza ringing in my ears as I tried some of my 11 year olds baking. Little steps, little steps she has to start somewhere!
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