A Pot of Daffs

I bought some potted daffodils
To grace my windowsill.
Their yellow brightness warms the room
As flowers always will.

They’ll only last a week or two
But how my soul does dance
Each time that golden color
Draws me in for one quick glance.

I’ve made myself a promise
That I hope that I can keep – 
That flowers will be waiting
When I rise and go to sleep.

I’ve reached the point in life
Where what I really understand
Is how vital it can be to have
Such beauty close at hand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/22/2015 2:35:00 PM
Beautiful words expressed with the heart of a poet. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/22/2015 12:00:00 PM
I want a daffodil. LOL
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Date: 4/22/2015 10:05:00 AM
Daffodils are certainly among my favorites, and through your poem you cause the reader to share your enjoyment of them....well done!
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Date: 4/21/2015 7:54:00 PM
sweet flower poem for the spring, dear. I could read your poetry forever!! (too bad I don't have lots of time!!!)
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Date: 4/21/2015 7:32:00 PM
G'day Ilene... once more a lovely poem to read and fully positive. I can visualize the colour, fragrance, and a reason to enjoy the company of a lovely flower. Thank you Ilene - Lindsay
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Date: 4/21/2015 6:13:00 PM
I love the beauty of the daffodil Ilene...lovely Tim
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Date: 4/21/2015 6:00:00 PM
Favorite flower fragrance unforgettable ...brings back memories of childhood with my granny and I picking daffodils on her 13 acres...thank you
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Date: 4/21/2015 5:51:00 PM
I wasn't well last week and my friend came round with chocolates, 2 yummy bisucits and a bunch of daffodils - the food is gone - the daffodils are still bringing me days of colour - charming write Ilene:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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