Notes About The Poem

A positive spin

There are different ways to interpret reality:
rose-coloured-glasses wins over the pessimist.
Why throw a dark shroud over day-to-day
there’s really nothing to gain ~
a smile always prevails over the frown.

Your outlook affects your mood
and your mood’s what measures your happiness.
Lightheartedness will always win in the end:
seeing the good side is an art,
it’s a skill that improves with practice.
It doesn’t take long to come naturally
once you start reaping the implicit benefits.

It’s a well kept secret
better than any magical spell ~
think good thoughts even if they’re fantasy.
Your heart is a garden requiring weeding ~
nurture the flowers and attract the sun.



Lineku: 3 stanzas of 5-7-5 lines, each line has 5 or 7 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Theraven Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 8:15 PM
Line, Positive force in this poem's garden. "nurture the flowers and attract the sun." A little good to take with, a little good to give. -Richard
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 5:27 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Richard ~ hope you are doing well
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