Frederic Parker Poet Triolet

A Positive Poem

The sun has risen in the east
Morning's light has struck the dark
Black has turned as gray increased
The sun has risen in the east
The strength of night has now decreased
And light of day will now embark
The sun has risen in the east
Morning's light has struck the dark



contest A Positive Poem
6/22/14

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Sara Kendrick June 30, 2014 at 4:36 PM I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara

Casarah Nance June 28, 2014 at 7:41 PM I like that, the morning's light has struck the dark, well done Frederic and grats on a winning poem :)

Arlene Smith June 28, 2014 at 1:23 PM love morning's light striking the dark.. Congrats on a great win, Frederic.. Hugs.. Arlene Frederic Parker June 28, 2014 at 2:16 PM thank you Arlene,a new friend I hope, and thank you for your kindness

Anne-Lise Andresen June 28, 2014 at 12:12 PM - 1 place!! - CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!! - Wish you a great weekend, Frederic. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Frederic Parker June 28, 2014 at 2:14 PM and you too have a great weekend my gentle friend

Dr.Ram Mehta June 28, 2014 at 9:58 AM Wonderful poem with the form of my choice Troilet,frederic Frederic Parker June 28, 2014 at 2:13 PM thank you Dr Ram for your kind response

Robert Lindley June 28, 2014 at 9:53 AM Big congrats on your win!!! Frederic Parker June 28, 2014 at 2:12 PM thank you Robert for your kind response

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 28, 2014 at 8:50 AM Very wonderful positivity here Frederic ! Congrats on huge win ! Frederic Parker June 28, 2014 at 2:12 PM Thank you Dr Upma for your kind response

Anne-Lise Andresen June 23, 2014 at 2:43 AM - Yes, a positive and beautiful poem Frederic! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)