Faye Gibson Poet Kimo

A Positive Poem

Drift away, resting, golden wood canoe,
still black water, yellow flecked,
sweet pollen confections.

Idle hours, soft swaddled in sun's warm wrap,
friendly heat, tranquil musings,
lily pad cookies float.

No conflict creases my deep water moat,
peace reigns within my cradle
Mother Earth gently rocks.

© Faye Lanham Gibson, June 18, 2014

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Sara Kendrick June 30, 2014 at 4:30 PM I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara

Casarah Nance June 28, 2014 at 8:03 PM Soothing :) well done, grats on first prize :)

Arlene Smith June 28, 2014 at 1:54 PM Such a soothing positive poem, Faye. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene

Dr.Ram Mehta June 28, 2014 at 10:07 AM I like the last stanza that tells it all, congrats, Faye

Robert Lindley June 28, 2014 at 9:56 AM Big congrats on your win!!!

Mohan Chutani June 28, 2014 at 4:56 AM Faye, nice idyllic kimos. Congrats for the win. Mohan

Carrie Richards June 19, 2014 at 8:03 PM One can just sigh with the beauty of this lovely string of kimos !! so nicely done!! Faye Gibson June 22, 2014 at 2:34 PM Thank you, Carrie. I appreciate you taking time out to visit.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2014 at 2:31 PM - Yes, really positive and lovely poem, Faye!! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)