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A Positive Poem

Drift away, resting, golden wood canoe, still black water, yellow flecked, sweet pollen confections. Idle hours, soft swaddled in sun's warm wrap, friendly heat, tranquil musings, lily pad cookies float. No conflict creases my deep water moat, peace reigns within my cradle Mother Earth gently rocks. © Faye Lanham Gibson, June 18, 2014

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Date: 6/30/2014 4:30:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
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Date: 6/28/2014 8:03:00 PM
Soothing :) well done, grats on first prize :)
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Date: 6/28/2014 1:54:00 PM
Such a soothing positive poem, Faye. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/28/2014 10:07:00 AM
I like the last stanza that tells it all, congrats, Faye
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Date: 6/28/2014 9:56:00 AM
Big congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 6/28/2014 4:56:00 AM
Faye, nice idyllic kimos. Congrats for the win. Mohan
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Date: 6/19/2014 8:03:00 PM
One can just sigh with the beauty of this lovely string of kimos !! so nicely done!!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 6/22/2014 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, Carrie. I appreciate you taking time out to visit.
Date: 6/18/2014 2:31:00 PM
- Yes, really positive and lovely poem, Faye!! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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