A Poppy and Venus

I love you 
I said to a poppy flower, 
Dancing coquettely on the light wind,   
Closely observed its nice red bowl
Outer and inner texture of covering and color,
Have tasted it freshness, odors and tenderness 
Even the little stamens
Ringing around a pistil have the tiniest velvet yellow heads
As a toothbrush for bees.
  
You so gracious and beautiful
No one craftsman will able to create
Such masterpiece
So usual in nature. 
And the awful fact
That after just one day
You will left your excellence
Filled me with sorrow
And melancholy,
And I am tenderly smell  its odor and kiss it
And breathe it    
And say farewell
For this astonishing, stunning
And immortal wonder,
Equal or even superior 
The marvel of eternal shinning Venus on morning heaven.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/19/2012 6:04:00 AM
A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Zamirbek. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2012 3:13:00 AM
Thank you Carol for your best wishes and warm welcoming. I were happy to read many poems from your page and just stanned and stoned by yours gifts, kindness, such inner and outer beaties. Be you happy to forever, dear Carol.
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