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A Poet's Ever Tweet

A rose, in the hands of God, lays her fate As Summer exhales its fury and dries its rain Those are Nature creed, just obey and not berate God's wisdom, vain minds couldn't debate. Pains that affect the heart, we do feel once As deep they might dig, the pleasure is immense Time when slow to meet a wish, the ache intense God's wisdom, vain minds couldn't make sense. A rhymer lays bare the fine music of verse Mother nature would fill a heart and wounds nurse Uphold Beauty and in the wonders of Poetry the soul immerse Wisdom, in a blessed heart, God would disperse. What of rarity, the words could not meet Who dares, of humanity, delete a heartbeat! Love and peace, a Poet's ever tweet Wisdom from the Almighty God, a huge treat.

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Date: 7/9/2019 5:52:00 PM
A beautiful poem full of wisdom. Lovely and a smooth read.
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/12/2019 4:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, M.L. Kiser, for your generosity and appreciative words.. My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 7/6/2019 7:26:00 AM
This beautiful and meaningful poem goes to prove what a very good writer you are Besma. Your students undoubtedly are lucky to partake of your lovely character and wisdom. In this case the 'rhymer' has done an excellent job! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/12/2019 4:20:00 AM
So kind are your words! So beautiful and genuine are your thoughts! So deep and generous is your response! Thank you so much, Paul, for your great support and sincere encouragement! So pleased, humbled and touched.. My deepest regards.. God bless you.
Date: 7/5/2019 10:44:00 AM
Much to ponder in this beauty. Thanks for your kind visit and words. Blessings Richard.
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/12/2019 4:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Richard, for honouring my humble work with your graceful presence and appreciative words.. My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 7/2/2019 6:34:00 PM
geat tribute to poets who "tweet" love and peace. I sure enjoyed the line: Who dares... delete a heartbeat."
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/3/2019 7:37:00 AM
Honoured and pleased to read your sweet tweet on my page.. thank you so much, Andrea, for your beauty and kindness.. Blessings.
Date: 6/30/2019 10:56:00 PM
Besma, You have kept the bargain true. In your poetic verse, find beauty upheld. In the poet's soul, wisdom. May the cool breeze find you, and may God bless you. -Richard
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 7/27/2019 8:41:00 PM
Hello Besma, This day has been enjoyed, even more so, because of poetry such as this.
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/1/2019 7:45:00 AM
So much humbled, elated and touched by so wonderful a feedback! So kind of you to spill such beautiful and sincere words on my humble soul and poetry.. thank you so much, Richard. I do highly value your honouring visits.. my deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 6/29/2019 12:32:00 PM
My beautiful & talented friend, Besma...your poetics speak volumes...you tame the white stallions we poets call 'paper' lol...a fav my friend...sending poetic love...^WW^
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/30/2019 1:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Winged Warrior for such a wonderful feedback! My honour and great delight receiving such elating and elevating appreciation from you! It adds a lot of Beauty to my humble poetry.. my warmest wishes and regards.. Blessings.
Date: 6/26/2019 1:59:00 PM
A very thought provoking verse Besma, Hope you are well. Tom
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/27/2019 1:55:00 AM
Trying, in Poetry, to find a heavenly breeze! Summer is burning! Hope you are well too.. Thank you so much Tom, for your kind and beautiful feedback.. My deepest regards. God bless you.
Date: 6/26/2019 7:11:00 AM
So many jewels of wisdom in these words..a superbly meaningful poem you wrote Besma. Love and peace resonate throughout in verses of guidance. I am so glad to FAV your poem.
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/27/2019 1:50:00 AM
I hold very dear your wonderful appreciation and sincere words, dear Vijay.. Your graceful presence and sincere encouragement mean a lot to me.. thank you so much for the Beauty you add to souls.. My warmest wishes and regards. Blessings.

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