A POETIC PLOY

I have seen some sloppy sonnets
Syllables buttoned wrong
Rhymes wrangling for recognition
Tripping over the final couplet
Rambling free verse
Ignoring the caution of line breaks
Stuttering in search of continuity
Freedom stifled in search of submission
Haiku
Mimicking a Geisha dancer
Mocking Basho’s frog
Quatrains leaving the station
Destinations … unknown
Mice trapped in a maze
Cursing the odor of the cheese
Knowing it is not a goal
But a test

Forget the cheese
Become the mouse
Dodge the traps
Be thrilled by the adventure
Of trying on a sloppy sonnet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Godwin Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 7:46 PM
Clever and a good time read, fun stuff. I'm enjoying reading you tonight. Surely, I've read you many times since joining. (btw, My Tim is a retired iron worker out of Local 28, Richmond, VA - read your bio)
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 9:39 PM
'Quatrains leaving the station // Destinations ... unkown' You have just won the unofficial 'Verse of the Day' contest. Congratulations!
Daniel Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 3:45 AM
Ironic write indeed, John:)
Smith  Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 9:07 PM
That is the aim of poetry, let yourself free to find adventure within these written words.
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