A Poetic Mess

( On the eternal non-sequitur of Prose Poetry )



The mess on the passenger side floor of my dodge van is prose... or poetry?
The battle rages!
Are we dialectical heirs, or hairs?

"The cross or the cross hairs". Carrol said that.

"He was awake a long time before he remembered his heart was broken". That's Hemingway.

"A rose by any other name". Shakespeare, of course.

A poetic work in the making...  A poetic mess!

Of all, only the half-drunk bottle of Merlot taunts me to exhume it.
The rest are content to be casts off of a crippled civility,
becoming themselves reminders, of the broken heart that names them.

As for me, I smoke life-shortening cigarettes in the sun-damaged van,
drink blasts of black Merlot in the shadows hush, and somewhere,
in midst of these confusing conspiracies, value oscillates- a shame-faced moon wanes.

Some draw to the light.  Others, the flame.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Babbit Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 9:13 AM
and the flame burns on.
Warlov Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 12:46 PM
But not without 'the light'. That's the problem with "Dualism" ~ all that don't fit so neatly within contestation
Rone Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 10:24 AM
"Some draw to the light. Others, the flame!" - this is excellent! Reminds me of "...to be a woman in love with a man in search of the flame." Jackson Browne - "You Love the Thunder"
Warlov Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Thanks
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 8:12 PM
It may have started out messy but it led up to a fantastic finale. The last two verses of this are amazing.
Warlov Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 5:19 PM
Coming from you, that really is "high-praise". Like the battle about prose-poetry, the valuable stuff in life can get lost too. Thanks for commenting.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 3:12 PM
Well done I enjoyed to read it. There lots of thoughts were running through my mind. Nice to meet you Robert.
Warlov Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 11:11 AM
thanks. sorry about late reply
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