A Poetic Expression of Love (Revised)

If you try and decipher the code, you'll see in my poetry;
That my love for you will explode, metaphorically!
The stanza's will demand release, and so I open up my heart.
My emotions will only increase, unveiling this poem like a canvas of art.

You'll discover a lover in me with a continuous burning desire.
My words in my poetry will have your luscious body on fire!
To cool you down my verbs in my words will be like ice.
In my couplet's you'll rightfully wear your crown, and live with me in paradise!

So as I D
           R
           O
           P my heavenly bomb, be prepared for ecstasy.
This passionate heat will be like napalm, hoping to have you next to me!
Such an explosion of love, tearing your emotional defenses apart.
It's not enough, I must take your body and mind above, just to win your heart!!

*Wrote for Catie Lindseys contest "Love Notes" Enjoyed;)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Wilson Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 10:09 AM
Very sensual ..loved it ..wow..good luck in the contest Jimmy..Take care~Deb
Haick Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:23 PM
Wishing you good luck in the contest, JAM! Love, Audrey
Roberts Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 10:47 AM
really good one Jimmy, love it, good luck in the contest
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