A Poetic Destination

A POETIC DESTINATION

I began writing  poetry at fourteen years
Of age,
An inherited gift from my grand-father
Whose sage,
Advice I always heeded,
Always strong with poetic guidance,
When needed.
My darling parents were not
Poetically inclined,
Loved them a lot, but poetry
Suggestions from them declined,
Poetry in our family had skipped,
A generation,
The poetic train of life had missed
A station!
On I went for decades writing
My poems,
Sometimes felt they were not good enough
Kept saying, Jenny get out of the doldrums!
Wanted to read other poetry, and
Share mine,
Then, two years ago, my friend read
My poems and said, what fine,
Work this is,
Go onto a poetry site, or else I’ll
Do it for you,
I took notice and immediately took
Her up on her cue.
Looked on the internet and found
Poetry Soup,
How did I ever survive without our
Wonderful group,
A friendly supporting, loving united
Troup.
What an amazing move 2 years ago
I made,
I will remain here for as long
As God grants me, as never before
Have I had poetic ideas cascade,
And thanks to my muse who collects,
Them and mentally files them,
I’ll never run out of themes
For as always, my muse stays ahead 
and projects!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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May Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 4:39 PM
The poetic gene was passed to you, thanks for shsring this wonerful write..
Kinard Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 3:52 PM
Compared to you I'm fairly new. I didn't start writing poetry until the year 2,000. and that's after I took a course in creative writing. I even took on a pen name. I am (The Poor Man's Poet) and I also go to poetry readings. there is nothing like hearing your poetry read out loud. I also got over my stage fright.
Proxenos Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 6:56 AM
Robert well done, you write beautiful poetry, keep penning those terrific writes, Blessings, Jennifer.
Chiri Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 12:02 AM
Lovely rhymes here! So enjoyed it!;)
Proxenos Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 11:15 PM
Thank-you Brenda, - you sound very special - thank you for all your kind comments, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Foster Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 12:21 PM
Hugs and hugs and hugs... I love your writes... They are wonderful... and often are the very thing that brighten my day. Ann
Proxenos Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 11:13 PM
Oh Ann, I am feeling a bit weepy today and there is nothing that would have made me happier than your comment which I have just read. I'm so glad you enjoy them, I write from experience and how I feel and the heart, and I love yours also because you do exactly the same dear friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Last stop: 'The Soup!' That's the end of the line---though it's actually a beginning for you and for so many of us (myself included). Thoroughly enjoyable read, Jennifer. Best wishes, Gershon
Proxenos Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 10:45 AM
Hi Gershon my friend, Hope you are well, don't know how I missed this great comment, apologies - thank-you so much. Blessings Gershon, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Last stop: 'The Soup!' That's the end of the line---though it's actually a beginning for you and for so many of us (myself included). Thoroughly enjoyable read, Jennifer. Best wishes, Gershon
Proxenos Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Hi Gershon - hey my friend, we all have a lot of spunk in us yet and so much more fun to be had on soup - seems like many would like to visit South Africa, perhaps we should all decide on a poetic destination and meet one another - WOW what a great event that would be! (spouses would be also invited). Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 16, 2019 at 9:00 AM
WoW! Jennifer, You were supposed to write! It's in your DNA, your were born a poet. I am so happy I get to be apart of your poetic journey. I really appreciate your gift my poetic friend from across the pond! Enjoy the rest of your your weekend:-) Alexis
Proxenos Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 10:23 AM
Thanks Alexis, you are such a darling - I think somehow, there is a bit of a poetic gene in all of us. Glad you enjoyed my poetic journey, I bet all of us have one. Hugs and blessings dear friend. Jenny.
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November 16, 2019 at 1:55 AM
You are meant to tread the path of poetry with a sensitive heart.. a beautiful mind and a wonderful feel.. what flows from the well of beauty does reach the depth of hearts and do shake minds.. A great pleasure to be on your unique path of Poetry, soul sister Jenny.. A Wonderful read that unveils your beauty.. Regards and blessings.. Love and hugs.
Proxenos Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 2:31 AM
You have such a wonderful way of expressing yourself so elegantly and in a refined manner - thank you for an awesome comment dear soul sister, may peace and love and light always be with you and your family. Hugs, kisses and blessings Besma. Jennifer.
Sergi Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 7:00 PM
Hi Jennifer I never tire of reading your poems. I echo the sentiments in your poem and attempt to continue writing despite occasional moments of dementia (smile)
Proxenos Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 2:26 AM
Ralph, you write the most amazing poetry and we will certainly keep on writing until we are unable to any more. Thank you for the compliment - hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Jeavons Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 10:52 AM
A lovely poem! Poetry runs in our family too! Two of my three daughters write and several of my cousins. So it seems, poetry may be in our genes! Blessings, Susan
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 11:28 AM
Hi Susan, so pleased to meet you here on soup. It seems that some families have the gift of writing poetry, others are artists, writers and so much more which is carried through to future generations with me however, a generation was missed before me. I would love to read your poetry and will be visiting your page. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 14, 2019 at 12:31 PM
- A wonderful story, dear Jenny - You were lucky to have your poetic grandfather - I know no one in my family who wrote poems ... my sister likes to write small stories - This fall my sister and I started a collaborative project and we will in the future make a book of it - I'm glad to have you as a friend here at the soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 11:23 AM
So am I dear friend, I know your heart matches your Sunny smile, you are a loyal, wonderful friend and I am privileged to know you through soup. I wish you and your sister every success, don''t forget to send me a copy when you publish your book! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 14, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Real feelings of a poet, thanks...
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Thank-you Ferdous I do appreciate your very kind comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Adams Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:50 AM
you were blessed with your grandfather's artistic ability and we are equally blessed that you share your poems with us here on PS...beautiful journey through your words... hugs :)
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Oh Sandra, thank you for such a lovely thoughtful, kind comment, but your poems absolutely ROCK my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 14, 2019 at 9:20 AM
A lovely memorial tale Jenny, we're all so glad you came and you've stayed for all our benefit. Blessings, Gordon
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November 15, 2019 at 10:55 AM
Gordon my dear friend, I'm so happy to hear from you I have missed all my friends on soup, and am almost back on track. Thank-you for a kind comment. Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
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November 14, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Lovely dear friend.... Inspiration is everywhere!!! Love your write. God bless you always, Gina
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Thank-you Regina, we all have each other to thank because we all support and love each other, and share a precious common talent - Poetry! Thank-you for a great comment, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 13, 2019 at 4:19 PM
And we are all glad you are here; wonderful journey you have taken.
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 10:45 AM
Thank you my friend - I have always felt your kind heart from the poems you post, such sincere, thoughtful themes, and may I add, with such talent! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 13, 2019 at 3:39 PM
I totally understand, Jennifer. How did we manager before PoetrySoup? Enjoyed your poem.
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 10:42 AM
With a bit of a hollow feeling I think Line, because we wanted to share our work and didn't know in which direction to go and then 'Voila', there was Poetry Soup, what a pleasure! Thank you for your lovely comment Line, glad you enjoyed my poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 13, 2019 at 2:25 PM
You got the gift from your grandfather--but your pen shines in your own right, Jennifer--excellent write my friend.
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 10:36 AM
Thank-you Vijay, what a kind comment - I'm happy you enjoyed this poem - I wanted to share my feelings with all my friends on Poetry Soup. Hugs and blessings dear Vijay, Jennifer.
May Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 2:01 PM
What a GREAT story of life Jennifer!! You write so well and your friend told you the truth my sweet friend!
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 10:32 AM
Thank-you Bobby a beautiful compliment, thank goodness for my friend. Your poetry is amazing! I always enjoy reading and commenting on them. Hugs and blessing my dear friend, Jennifer.
Na Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 12:17 PM
Hi Jen glad you chose to come here. I`m new myself and I am fitting in great. I have been writing for a long time and enjoy sharing my poetry and reading others. Thanks for sharing this
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 10:28 AM
Hi Gregory, Welcome aboard - it is a brilliant feeling to be able to post our poems and share them with others and to comment on the poems of fellow poets. I will certainly be visiting your page. Thank you for a great comment, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Green Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 11:40 AM
This was wonderful Jennifer, I loved everything about this. I hope you keep writing and posting here. This is a wonderful place with so many amazing people.
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November 15, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Hi Chris, Thank you for such a lovely comment - three generations lived in the home we sold, between us all, 45 years of memories, it was an emotional move. I'll certainly remain with Poetry soup, have made such wonderful friends. I simply have to say that I think your poems are awesome! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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