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A Poem of Sincerity For Sai Laksamana

i don't know where to start so i will do it this way i met a girl on facebook who used to complete my day no matter where i look it seems like she's always on my sight, but lately i guessed she's sad everyday and every night what can i do to bring the smile back to her, im not even one of her friends, so do i really have to care? i hate every time i see that she really look so down, i wish i could make her laugh by acting like a clown don't worry pretty lady my intention is clean to become somehow close to you, that's my biggest dream. ^_^

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Date: 4/2/2022 8:33:00 AM
Hi Sai! di ko alam kung binabalikan mo mo pa to. hehe. More than 10 years na pala nung nasulat ko to. Bigla kita naalala kaya pumunta ko dito. Grabe ang bilis ng panahon. Napaisip tuloy ako kung ano ng balita sayo, kung may asawa ka na ba, kung kasal ka na, kung may mga anak ka na. hehe kung isang araw magkasalubong tayo sa daan sana hindi ka mailang kung babatiin kita. kung sakali mn na mangyare. :) ingat ka lage. kahit ilang taon na lumipas hindi pa rin pala kita nalimutan :) -Jerom
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Date: 3/23/2016 9:56:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Jerome. LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 5:48:00 PM
Jerome, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/2/2011 5:27:00 AM
I hope that this 'pretty lady' you speak of comes back to you with a huge bright smile spread across her face. Sounds like your a good guy, keep your chin up and your heart open(:
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Date: 5/2/2011 4:58:00 AM
A sweet, heartfelt write. Do what your heart tells you to, Jerome. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 5/2/2011 4:31:00 AM
tnx 4 the comments.. =)
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Date: 5/1/2011 3:37:00 PM
Let me see Jerome, many can relate to this.... its hard to get someones attention... I think if u let her be she will miss your friendship.... u seem like a nice guy... take care of yourself...and welcome to the soup... Linda
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Date: 5/1/2011 6:52:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jerome. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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