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A Poem of Love

A POEM OF LOVE Darling, I shall never, never forget the excitement your heart had awakened in my heart. How gentle it was, my heart was nearly breaking, full of elation from the mixed up feelings of pleasure, pain, joy, pride and modest sorrow. How much mercy the Lord had bestowed upon me, allowing me to dream of those days, when we imagined a better world together, how to defeat poverty without changing the direction of the wind. You know how much love feels for the destiny of mankind, how should I tell you? (if I'm not wrong) that love is born, without becoming, just like a poet who spent his youth in the empire of classical shadows. Darling! I am writing this poem in faithful service to love. It is lightened by the sun, which might shine its light on all my thoughts of happiness, in which we shall spend all of our future years together. © Walter William Safar

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Date: 12/14/2011 9:32:00 AM
you have mistakenly entered this in the "english Quintain" contest, please remove it and perhaps you could write an "English Quintain" for the contest please read the contest rules again.
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Date: 12/8/2011 1:09:00 PM
Stopping back to read more of your excellent poetry today Walter. Please continue with your writing and share it with us. Don't forget to enter some of the member contests. Love, Carol
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Walter W. Safar
Date: 12/14/2011 5:43:00 AM
Sweet Carol, Thank..thank you for your kind and warm words of support and suggestion,I am honored to accept your suggestion, From the Heart an Poet yours Walter

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