A Poem Lovely as the Snow

I think that I shall never know A poem lovely as the snow The snow that melts in the hot sun And makes playing with it so fun The snow that's white, soft and fluffy And stirs the heart of a toughie The snow that looks quite delightful Watching it fall, I'm insightful Sometimes it's slick and wet and cold But life's hidden beneath its hold A poem has that special glow But e'en it can't compete with snow
Written on 2nd March 2022 For Margarita Lillico's "A poem lovely as a" contest
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Kauffman Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 1:23 PM
Even with all of the downsides to snow, you have seen the blessings in this winter phenomenon. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 11:41 AM
This is so sweet and is much like the Tree version in meter and style. Congrats for your win. You are like my mother, who also would probably have chosen snow.
Gasun Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 4:57 PM
Wow! This is fantastic! I love it. Congratulations on your win my dear Jo. Thanks for sharing. Hugs
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 4:48 AM
Much enjoyed the tone and flow of your poem, Jo. Indeed a beautiful ode to snow!
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