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A poem for YOU

In this world of Uncertainties I’m the man that you can trust And in my words of sincerity That my love would never last. And if you could only feel, what i feel for you You can ask me “why?” so you can see the truth Like our love that tightens the rope, Like a light that would give us hope. As you watch the dark skies Let me grab the moon for you, And as I catch the bright stars That’s the way you can see me through As this planet turns as it always will And things go wrong and you don’t know what to feel Hold my hand for it will make us strong Like a wind, we will carry on The wind blow that sings a hymn for you For they know what does love means for the two Love is blind, and not deaf So how’s success if you’re not ready to bet? In this poem with full of rhymes, A full of love, Babe can you be mine? I don’t expect too much from you Why should I? If you complete my whole. “Till death do us part” that’s what they have said But why do struggles crash them ahead? Don’t ask me when my love will last, To count all of our quarrels, is that a must? Now and Forever is all that I promise No day dreaming and without reminiscence As the matter of time, as the time passes by Together we stand, together you and I
A poem for my Girlfriend for our anniversary :) pls comment and rate... you are free to judge and criticize my work :) God Bless

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Date: 11/29/2013 9:45:00 AM
Making her smile is your style!
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Emmanuel Fajutagana
Date: 11/30/2013 1:13:00 AM
hehe.. that's right, i just always want to make her happy.. thanks for the appreciation Chuck.
Date: 11/27/2013 2:25:00 PM
SMOOTH
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Emmanuel Fajutagana
Date: 11/30/2013 1:15:00 AM
well.. i think so :)
Date: 11/23/2013 8:13:00 AM
very awesome!!! keep it up..and keep on fighting for your love .. ;')
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Emmanuel Fajutagana
Date: 11/23/2013 9:53:00 AM
thanks for the comment Aiyah :) God bless
Date: 11/21/2013 10:12:00 AM
Hi Emmanuel, how did you know I needed a smile this morning... :-) Thank you for the smile through soup mail... A lovely strong piece. Love is a strong bond, that I think not even death can take. great dedication.... SKAT
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Emmanuel Fajutagana
Date: 11/21/2013 11:40:00 AM
i just follow my intuition Skat :) that's a nice quote.. is that for me? hehe