Brian Strand Poet Verse

A Poem For Poetry's Sake

When she and I became we
True love for us may not be-
'til I love her,who loves me

Then,she and I became we
Still,true love for us,could not be
'til I knew her,who loved me

Now,she and I ,who became three
In each the other,true love see
part of each,dear child in thee

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Carrie Richards August 25, 2010 at 5:54 PM Your poetry has an eloquence that I've missed. So nice to read this lovely piece, and feel the tenderness. Enjoyed this, Brian. Love, Carrie

Caroline Cécile Delacroix August 22, 2010 at 11:23 PM Awesome write, Brian! Quite a blessing you have and share with us eloquently. Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 22, 2010 at 6:21 PM Such a sweet and gracious poem Brian.. good luck in the contest... enjoyed this piece.. with luv..ciao..

Doris Culverhouse August 22, 2010 at 5:25 PM enjoyed reading today! Romantic work!

Francine Roberts August 22, 2010 at 8:19 AM thats was lovely, I really enjoyed it

Kristi Hayner August 22, 2010 at 7:06 AM OMG! So beautifully simple and yet so unbelievable difficult to attain...........

Anthony Nutter August 22, 2010 at 6:47 AM I like this poem for poetry sake. Two souls joining as one and becoming three. Very nice indeed

Michael J. Falotico August 22, 2010 at 6:13 AM Well written my friend...just correct first line "became" otherwise perfect! always Michael