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A Poem For Poetry's Sake

When she and I became we True love for us may not be- 'til I love her,who loves me Then,she and I became we Still,true love for us,could not be 'til I knew her,who loved me Now,she and I ,who became three In each the other,true love see part of each,dear child in thee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/25/2010 5:54:00 PM
Your poetry has an eloquence that I've missed. So nice to read this lovely piece, and feel the tenderness. Enjoyed this, Brian. Love, Carrie
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Date: 8/22/2010 11:23:00 PM
Awesome write, Brian! Quite a blessing you have and share with us eloquently. Caroline.
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:21:00 PM
Such a sweet and gracious poem Brian.. good luck in the contest... enjoyed this piece.. with luv..ciao..
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Date: 8/22/2010 5:25:00 PM
enjoyed reading today! Romantic work!
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Date: 8/22/2010 8:19:00 AM
thats was lovely, I really enjoyed it
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:06:00 AM
OMG! So beautifully simple and yet so unbelievable difficult to attain...........
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:47:00 AM
I like this poem for poetry sake. Two souls joining as one and becoming three. Very nice indeed
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:13:00 AM
Well written my friend...just correct first line "became" otherwise perfect! always Michael
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