A Poem For My Mommy

How loaded is the word Mother-with dirty diapers, running noses Late night upchuck, the bedtime stories and *the Diwali delicacies. Seeing chaos, mess, too much noise, squabbles and broken toys My mother said at bedtime kiss,” why do you multiply my woes? We had very tough time – the economic crisis for a short period Only four loafs of wheat for the five members sometimes we had. She would promptly announced, she'd already her share of bread “I was soo……. hungry, I had mine” she would dramatically add. Though we all knew it, she wouldn't eat alone leaving us behind. That expression for sometime became her nota bene in her mind. Some mothers are kissing, some are scolding, & some are the both However it is love all the same and Mommy, you're both for our growth.
============================================ *Diwali, a festival of lights, the last day of Hindu calendar year like the New Year eve of the Christian Calendar March 14, 2014 Form: Rhyme Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: Poem for Mommy by Leonara Ghalinta
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Harrell Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 7:59 AM
Congrats on your win! Love it, Dr. Ram with the personal info. Enjoyed!
Shines Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 9:22 AM
Congrats on your win.:)
Sirak Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Stunning tribute! Congrats on your win.
Deschler Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 8:06 PM
A very tender and heartfelt tribute to your Mother. A touching write, Dr. Ram! Well done! Congratulations on your win, as well!
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March 19, 2014 at 5:33 PM
Dr Ram , A tender loving write... :) Congratulations, with your winning poem, --A very touching topic, sponsored by the Awesome and Sweet Leonora-- Sending hugs ~LINDA
Stephens Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:07 PM
Hi Ram, Congrats on your placement. Enjoyed your poem on childhood with your Mom. Regards x
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 2:09 PM
Very fitting tribute Dr. Congrats on your win.//// ps...Is the 'w' in "Diwali" pronounced "w" or "v"; I always have meant to ask. // paul
Walker  Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Well penned and congratulations on the win Dr. Ram
Gasun Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 11:39 AM
This is a great poem for your mom my dear friend Dr. Ram. Congratulations! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest! Love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Mehta Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 5:52 AM
Thanks for my placement, Leo
Sergi Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Beautifully written, Dr. Ram Mothers are to be cherished. I wish you well in the contest.
Bauer Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 4:59 PM
nicely written and a perfect entry for the contest. good luck!
Torres Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 10:36 AM
this is great ,Dr. Ram!!! this will sure a win! ...every mom dreams all the best for their children..I love all the lines on your poem... it's an honor to meet your mom!! ..^__^
Torres Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:12 PM
CONGRATULATIONS Sir Ram!!! ^__^ ...
Goswami Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 2:46 AM
Maa..............I love you so much....Thank you very much Sir....
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