A Poem For My Mommy

How loaded is the word Mother-with dirty diapers, running noses Late night upchuck, the bedtime stories and *the Diwali delicacies. Seeing chaos, mess, too much noise, squabbles and broken toys My mother said at bedtime kiss,” why do you multiply my woes? We had very tough time – the economic crisis for a short period Only four loafs of wheat for the five members sometimes we had. She would promptly announced, she'd already her share of bread “I was soo……. hungry, I had mine” she would dramatically add. Though we all knew it, she wouldn't eat alone leaving us behind. That expression for sometime became her nota bene in her mind. Some mothers are kissing, some are scolding, & some are the both However it is love all the same and Mommy, you're both for our growth.
============================================ *Diwali, a festival of lights, the last day of Hindu calendar year like the New Year eve of the Christian Calendar March 14, 2014 Form: Rhyme Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: Poem for Mommy by Leonara Ghalinta

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Date: 6/2/2014 7:59:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Love it, Dr. Ram with the personal info. Enjoyed!
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Date: 3/26/2014 9:22:00 AM
Congrats on your win.:)
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:47:00 AM
Stunning tribute! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/20/2014 8:06:00 PM
A very tender and heartfelt tribute to your Mother. A touching write, Dr. Ram! Well done! Congratulations on your win, as well!
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Date: 3/19/2014 5:33:00 PM
Dr Ram , A tender loving write... :) Congratulations, with your winning poem, --A very touching topic, sponsored by the Awesome and Sweet Leonora-- Sending hugs ~LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 4:07:00 PM
Hi Ram, Congrats on your placement. Enjoyed your poem on childhood with your Mom. Regards x
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Date: 3/19/2014 2:09:00 PM
Very fitting tribute Dr. Congrats on your win.//// ps...Is the 'w' in "Diwali" pronounced "w" or "v"; I always have meant to ask. // paul
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:45:00 AM
Well penned and congratulations on the win Dr. Ram
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:39:00 AM
This is a great poem for your mom my dear friend Dr. Ram. Congratulations! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest! Love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 3/20/2014 5:52:00 AM
Thanks for my placement, Leo
Date: 3/16/2014 8:53:00 AM
Beautifully written, Dr. Ram Mothers are to be cherished. I wish you well in the contest.
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Date: 3/14/2014 4:59:00 PM
nicely written and a perfect entry for the contest. good luck!
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Date: 3/14/2014 10:36:00 AM
this is great ,Dr. Ram!!! this will sure a win! ...every mom dreams all the best for their children..I love all the lines on your poem... it's an honor to meet your mom!! ..^__^
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/19/2014 1:12:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS Sir Ram!!! ^__^ ...
Date: 3/14/2014 2:46:00 AM
Maa..............I love you so much....Thank you very much Sir....
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