A Poem for Kim

The news is grim -
one eye for Kim. 
I hope she sees
wee words like these.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 5:15 PM
awww, you're so thoughtful!
Crandall Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 9:31 PM
haha, thanks!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:35 PM
LOL! Thanks, David for giving me a laugh! Doing better today.
Crandall Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:43 PM
haha - I'm glad to hear that!
Wolf Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 1:43 PM
Here's hoping that it's a blip on Kim's screen. Eye sure hope so! ~ gw
Crandall Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 9:30 PM
Looks, like she was able to read it, and is doing better :-))
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Oh. I see you read her blog. I found out it's an infected eye. She will soon be fine. Cute poem though.
Crandall Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 9:29 PM
haha yep, glad she's doing better.
Kendrick Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 12:22 PM
Whoa!! I wonder who Kim is and what caused only one eye. Thank you for sharing. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 9:29 PM
If you read Kim R's blog, you'll understand this one better!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 12:09 PM
Few words with much said. Great health for everyone.... Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away..........
Crandall Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 9:29 PM
Thanks, Paula!
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