A Poem

A poem is written to be read
If only by the poet.
Of course, it's gratifying if
To others she can show it.

But oftentimes, the words remain
Just floating there, in limbo,
The writer standing to the side
With head cocked, arms akimbo.

Yet even if no feedback comes,
The poet's had her say
And when she reads what she has penned,
She smiles and feels okay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

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Makama Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 3:47 AM
This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 10:16 PM
You should always feel satisfied with what you have written, even if there are no comments forthcoming. Although one may get discouraged with a non-response or a negative one... hey, it's uniquely yours and you should be proud. An important message for us writers to ponder. Best wishes, Keith
Tunick Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 9:23 PM
Your poems make me smile and feel good too.
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 5:42 PM
I can relate to these words totally Ilene:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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