A Poem

When I see your beautiful face, my problems just seem to go
You shine like a single star above me
With you, my friend, wasted time is no longer wasted at all
Only with the presence of you, can I truly say I’m free
Without you, I would do nothing but fall
And you name, forever more, I would call

Through many years of knowing you, on me you continue to grow
Like the sun, I am used to you bright shine
Your perfection is unrivaled by anyone else on earth
Nothing would be sweeter than for you to say you will stay mine
We where destined for each other from birth
Trust me, for few, would I walk such a line

With the grace of the most beautiful torrent is how you flow
Most of my life I’ve seen you walk about 
However now I get to be with you, hand in hand we walk
To go without you now would cause nothing but loveless drought
How it makes me happy to, with you, talk
If you left me now, I would die, in shock

If you left me all alone, then fly away would many crow
Yet, loves fire will forever burn on
And because of this, I will love you for as long as I live
That is a promise, miss, and my promises I keep, you’ll learn
I love you, girl, that’s the most I can give you
When next to you, my stomach will just churn
I LOVE YOU MISS!
This you must learn!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/21/2011 8:28:00 AM
Andrew, your poem is awesome,,, and lovely... hope they get your message... take care,..linda
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