A Poem

When I see your happy face
I know that everything is
In place.
Love finds a way to your heart
It's like like a beautiful
Piece of art.
You love when I say your name.
Our love then bursts into flames.
Why can't I tell you if you only knew.
I don't mean to smother
But will we ever love eachother?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Perkins Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 8:52 PM
Well we'd never see each other, and thats a pretty big prob. So I dunno if it's worth it getting into it, and you have nothing to be sorry about. Seriously, I'm not mad or anything.
Perkins Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 3:28 PM
I live in Illinois, I have a cellphone, but pretty much all you need to do is go to yahoo.com and just make a email account and email me, if that doesn't work we'll figure somethin out.
Mcmorrow Avatar
October 7, 2008 at 2:46 PM
this is cool. keep writing stuff like this man. thanks for commenting on my poem "I Don't Love You..." i like your stuff when it is like this.
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