A Poem

When I see your happy face I know that everything is In place. Love finds a way to your heart It's like like a beautiful Piece of art. You love when I say your name. Our love then bursts into flames. Why can't I tell you if you only knew. I don't mean to smother But will we ever love eachother?

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Kyle Perkins

Date: 10/17/2008 8:52:00 PM

Well we'd never see each other, and thats a pretty big prob. So I dunno if it's worth it getting into it, and you have nothing to be sorry about. Seriously, I'm not mad or anything.

Kyle Perkins

Date: 10/16/2008 3:28:00 PM

I live in Illinois, I have a cellphone, but pretty much all you need to do is go to yahoo.com and just make a email account and email me, if that doesn't work we'll figure somethin out.

Steven Mcmorrow

Date: 10/7/2008 2:46:00 PM

this is cool. keep writing stuff like this man. thanks for commenting on my poem "I Don't Love You..." i like your stuff when it is like this.