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A Place To Hide Away...

I need a place to hide away That i can go whether night or day to lie and dream of you and i In a world where dreams and hopes dont die Far away from the greed and wrath Sloth, envy and pride link to one path All on this path travel in dark Money and wealth will give them no spark Along their path comes stife and pain Quick, easy pleasures consumed in vain I think of the future that they pursue and my own future i seriously review I decide i want to be an exception As this dark path does not suit my perception. Yes, lying here has been quite a refreshment It is now easier to suffer torment Knowing soon i shall drift and leave them behind New friends, new cultures, new people i will find Feeling rejuvenated i proceed to open my eyes Life will not have structure, but adventures ready to arise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/1/2010 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Not. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 10:45:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/3/2010 2:15:00 PM
Everyone wishes to find that plays were dreams never die.. and adventures arise.. Hiding away from pain is so beautiful..thanks God for dreams..Heartfelt and sad yet very hopeful.lovely poem..Charma
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Date: 12/30/2009 9:59:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Not. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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