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A Place So Dark

You are poison Poison for my heart In a way that no one can know A god's betrayal so solemnly unfolds In a place so dark there are no holes Only blackness that unfolds and unfolds Into sentiments untold Buried deep beneath my pain, sorrow and desolate shame Is this place so hollow even I Fail, am siezed Cease to exist Across from me the danger of my weakness sits Writhing, convulsing beneath the weight of this My past, my desires, my values leak from every orifice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/16/2012 9:36:00 PM
Zaida, you are easily one of the most talented poets here on the Soup. I love your writes..One love. Joy Wells
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Zaida Ruiz
Date: 9/17/2012 7:00:00 AM
Oh wow. I'm deeply humbled and honored by your words. Thank you so much.

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