A Place In the Sun

When you're feeling down,

There's a place in the sun that gives safe and sound.

In the midst of your wrongful grief,

One prayer eases pain and gives a relief.

 

How come that you lose hope and give up right away?

Have you tried to do something worthy for today?

Everything may not come on your planned time,

God sees your struggle and He'll give you the sweetest lime.

 

Why keep on asking for something you don't have?

Have you counted the blessings that were given above?

If something bothers you at night, 

God waits and will give you the brightest light.

 

You said that you're unloved and oppressed?

Have you called His name to heal your soul that is suppressed?

If everything seems to be hopelessly unfair,

Remember that God is on your side to get rid of your despair.

 

I perfectly understand how you feel,

I was there and experienced the whole thrill.

In the midst of high and strong oppression,

I called God and bring these problems to His attention.

 

Lei Strauss, 2015
Contest Name: A Place In The Sun
Sponsored by:Gail Angel Doyle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 15, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Lei, This is a sweet win. *Skat LOVE*
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February 4, 2015 at 12:21 AM
Words of wisdom to inspire, Lei...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda
Strauss Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 4:55 AM
Thanks Rhonda...Appreciate it much!
A. Sharma Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 4:56 AM
Great inspiring masterpiece Lei! Congrats on big win!
Strauss Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 4:57 AM
Thanks Dr. Upma! Your words uplift me so well.Appreciate it!
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 12:39 PM
Lovely uplifting write Lei - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx a 7 from me xx
Strauss Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 4:57 AM
Thanks so much Jan! Really means so much to me!
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