Deborah Burch Poet Rhyme

A Place

A Place


There's a place where horses run...waters flow and music fills the air...
No sadness...No tears...No Hunger...No rain
It's a place of rolling hills...poppy fields and light is Everywhere...
No sickness...No fears...No dieing...No pain...
A place of No more bills...debts Paid In Full...and loved ones meet you there... 

~by deborah burch©
3/25/2012

**Jesus said: "I go to prepare 'A Place' for you..."










(3/27/2012---last line inspired in part by Russell Sivey and Phyllis Babcock...Thank you both!!!BIG HUGG,Love~deb)

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Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2012 at 10:32 PM Wonderful how you describe it, Deborah. Goodnight now. I think I will finish up for the night.

Wilma Neels March 28, 2012 at 12:44 PM You make the reader yearn for this place Deborah, enjoyed this write ;) Wilma x x Deborah Burch April 2, 2012 at 1:16 AM Thank you so very much Wilma...indeed...one day...thank you for stopping by...I'm deeply honoured you enjoyed my work...big huggsss my friend,love deb

Phyllis Babcock March 27, 2012 at 3:36 PM this is the place I want to be and yahoo no more bills on the way, no more diets, only peace and contentment. love phyl

Russell Sivey March 26, 2012 at 10:28 PM And where you never ever have any bills... Ha ha doesn't rhyme with anything, but fits in with the theme somewhat! I've enjoyed your poetry tonight! Very fine job! I love this Piece!! Great Work!!