A Place

A Place There's a place where horses run...waters flow and music fills the air... No sadness...No tears...No Hunger...No rain It's a place of rolling hills...poppy fields and light is Everywhere... No sickness...No fears...No dieing...No pain... A place of No more bills...debts Paid In Full...and loved ones meet you there... ~by deborah burch© 3/25/2012 **Jesus said: "I go to prepare 'A Place' for you..." (3/27/2012---last line inspired in part by Russell Sivey and Phyllis Babcock...Thank you both!!!BIG HUGG,Love~deb)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2012 10:32:00 PM

Wonderful how you describe it, Deborah. Goodnight now. I think I will finish up for the night.

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/28/2012 12:44:00 PM

You make the reader yearn for this place Deborah, enjoyed this write ;) Wilma x x

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/2/2012 1:16:00 AM

Thank you so very much Wilma...indeed...one day...thank you for stopping by...I'm deeply honoured you enjoyed my work...big huggsss my friend,love deb

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/27/2012 3:36:00 PM

this is the place I want to be and yahoo no more bills on the way, no more diets, only peace and contentment. love phyl

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/26/2012 10:28:00 PM

And where you never ever have any bills... Ha ha doesn't rhyme with anything, but fits in with the theme somewhat! I've enjoyed your poetry tonight! Very fine job! I love this Piece!! Great Work!!