A Pinocchio Dream " Inspired By Rain "... & Special Thanks To John Robbins :)

It's not the usual bed time stories book that u expect to see 
Beside it all the other tales books on the shelf are well done 
The book that make you smile along the pages 
Or remind you how childhood had been so much fun 
It may seem a usual fairy tale book 
So just turn its pages & let's have a look 
The first tale is for Pinocchio 
The old fairy tale that we used to hear 
About a wooden puppet who dreamed of being real  
The blue fairy said she could help him if he proved he worth it 
Then she could turn him to a real boy no longer a puppet 
He only needs to prove he could be brave, truthful & unselfish 
 Able to tell right from wrong by listening to his conscience 
But it seems he couldn't understand any of it 
& started to act totally the opposite 
But then after a long adventure being such a bad toy 
He ended up with donkey ears & tears of a little boy 
& all what he got was a poor wooden broken heart 
Didn’t know how to end this or why did he make all this start 
U could stop at this point, I think you know how the story end 
Just try to listen what message it's been trying to send  
It's not about being a person or something made of wood 
It's about worth being real or not 
U may be breathing but are you real 
Or you are turning to be wooden & u can't even feel 
 With a little help of the blue fairy, bravery & truth
Without being yet real without searching for an excuse 
The puppet strings no more belong to Pinocchio 
So if you don’t worth being a real person then those strings belong to you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 2:25 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 3:37 PM
moura, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 1:36 AM
Noura, a wonderful poem to read. SKAT
Saucillo Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 12:57 PM
such a great metaphor on life and love. i love this poem! <3 keep writing.
Chircop Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 1:04 PM
a very good poem indeed--Charma
Biffany Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 7:14 PM
Thank you so much on your comment on my poem "Paper Dreams". I do have artwork along with it and your feedback was so appreciated. I've enjoyed your poems as well. Randy
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 5:15 AM
Thank you for writing and sharing the twist of the usual with us Noura. Excellent write. Love, Carol
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 8:40 AM
Nice twist in a old tale . A truthful statement. Noura your a exelent writter that keeps improving with every write good job
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