A Pink Cake For Me

A physical, some lumps, mammography, biopsies 

Chemo, radiation, surgery, side effects 

Near the edge, the strength, the will, sprouting back to life

The scars, a gift, a miracle, a testimony, reflects


Njeri Hunjeri 
Sponsor Name Poet Destroyer A
Contest Name PINKTOBER #2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 12:56 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write njeri!
Hunjeri Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 3:53 AM
Hi Dr Upma,thank you alot
A  Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 12:01 PM
congrats..... skat
Hunjeri Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 3:52 AM
Hi SKAT. thank you alot
Godwin Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 9:18 AM
I enjoyed how it all leads up to a positive and dramatic last line. Congratulations on your placement. I just noticed that your first and last name rhyme. How cool is that! (I admit I have no idea to pronounce either name.) ... CayCay
Hunjeri Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 5:05 AM
Its easy...i'll teach u...the n is kinda silent so my name sounds the same as 'Jerry' . and the last name is a story by itself..I'll tell you one day. Thanks CayCay and good day
A   Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 11:58 PM
Njeri, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest PINKTOBER blog titles "YOU SAY," if you'd like or have time. Always ~LINDA~
Hunjeri Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 5:02 AM
Hi Linda, yes I'll check out the blog. Thanks for the placement and the congrats.
Smith Carter Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 12:26 PM
I read your poem, Njeri! An abbreviated "testimony" that reminds all of what this road is like. Good one! L
Hunjeri Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 2:36 PM
thank you L. its a testimony to many and thankfully with technology some of these cancers are getting diagnosed and treated early.
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 6:12 PM
I've been down the mammogram and biopsy route myself Njeri - thankfully nothing sinister found but my maternal grandma died of the disease so I am breast aware:-) great write good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 3, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Thank u Jan and am sorry about yout grandmother. I wasnt sure how to write this for contest. I mean i didnt know whether to tell a story or what. Luckily i dont have anyone close to me who has been affected by this disease but ive met several women who have.
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