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A Pillow In the Sky

Simply, you and I. A gold pillow in the sky. Two bluebirds, just fly. Rhymed Senryu 1/1/2022

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Date: 1/10/2022 7:10:00 PM
beautiful rhyming
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Date: 1/3/2022 1:19:00 AM
You paint a very blissful scene Pangie, Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/3/2022 4:33:00 AM
Lomg time no see! Was answering your mail, and erased it Sorry, ThanksTom,,,Pangie xo
Date: 1/2/2022 8:34:00 AM
Simply delightful Panagiota ~ oh how i I would love to fly. This is really such a wonderful Senryh ~ a golden pillow in the sky ~ WOW! Hugs Ann xxxxooooxxxx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/2/2022 11:37:00 AM
I am so glad you liked this, Ann! thank you for making me feel better today. Your wonderful email did the trick. I wish we lived on the same continent. then...you could meet QUEEN IRENE. ^*^}}}} and we could run about wearing red, no pastels. Two hot numbers we are.....Pangie So respectful, I am of you!
Date: 1/2/2022 8:07:00 AM
This was so fun to read and enjoy.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/2/2022 11:43:00 AM
Hi Elena... Glad you enjoyed this. I really like the rhymed ones to write..not good at unrhymed ones at all. Thank you for respecting another poet... but don’t p,ease, be a show odd commentor...Pangie Live life in the real world not online,,,)))
Date: 1/1/2022 8:17:00 PM
Sweet and sweeter. These senryus really suit you. Excelsior! :) gw
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/2/2022 2:02:00 AM
How nice Gershon! Basho’s rhymed style works best for me. Keep me in your prayers, stair climbing this week.I Am walking very well, Want to be in my own place,,,pangie
Date: 1/1/2022 4:05:00 PM
A lighthearted, sweet Senryu. Well done.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/2/2022 1:56:00 AM
From you? A well done equals a trophy.)) Pangie Thank you
Date: 1/1/2022 8:07:00 AM
spread those wings Pangy and fly girl fly
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Date: 1/1/2022 10:10:00 AM
John, I forgot to write you yesterday and wish you The Best NEw Year. I really am spreading my wings. It’s fun to walk again, though I was terrified. I appreciate fire so much more now. Best to you.l,Pangie,

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