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A Pillow In the Sky

Simply, you and I.
      A gold pillow in the sky.
      Two bluebirds, just fly.


        Rhymed  Senryu
                1/1/2022

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Karen Croft

January 10, 2022 at 7:10 PM

beautiful rhyming

Tom Cunningham

January 3, 2022 at 1:19 AM

You paint a very blissful scene Pangie, Tom

Panagiota Romios

January 3, 2022 at 4:33 AM

Lomg time no see! Was answering your mail, and erased it Sorry, ThanksTom,,,Pangie xo

Ann Gilmour

January 2, 2022 at 8:34 AM

Simply delightful Panagiota ~ oh how i I would love to fly. This is really such a wonderful Senryh ~ a golden pillow in the sky ~ WOW! Hugs Ann xxxxooooxxxx

Panagiota Romios

January 2, 2022 at 11:37 AM

I am so glad you liked this, Ann! thank you for making me feel better today. Your wonderful email did the trick. I wish we lived on the same continent. then...you could meet QUEEN IRENE. ^*^}}}} and we could run about wearing red, no pastels. Two hot numbers we are.....Pangie So respectful, I am of you!

Elena Eagle

January 2, 2022 at 8:07 AM

This was so fun to read and enjoy.

Panagiota Romios

January 2, 2022 at 11:43 AM

Hi Elena... Glad you enjoyed this. I really like the rhymed ones to write..not good at unrhymed ones at all. Thank you for respecting another poet... but don’t p,ease, be a show odd commentor...Pangie Live life in the real world not online,,,)))

Gershon Wolf

January 1, 2022 at 8:17 PM

Sweet and sweeter. These senryus really suit you. Excelsior! :) gw

Panagiota Romios

January 2, 2022 at 2:02 AM

How nice Gershon! Basho’s rhymed style works best for me. Keep me in your prayers, stair climbing this week.I Am walking very well, Want to be in my own place,,,pangie

M. L. Kiser

January 1, 2022 at 4:05 PM

A lighthearted, sweet Senryu. Well done.

Panagiota Romios

January 2, 2022 at 1:56 AM

From you? A well done equals a trophy.)) Pangie Thank you

John Lawless

January 1, 2022 at 8:07 AM

spread those wings Pangy and fly girl fly

Panagiota Romios

January 1, 2022 at 10:10 AM

John, I forgot to write you yesterday and wish you The Best NEw Year. I really am spreading my wings. It’s fun to walk again, though I was terrified. I appreciate fire so much more now. Best to you.l,Pangie,

A Pillow In the Sky

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