A Piece of Heaven

For when I hold her
I loose all sense of this world
My piece of heaven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 30, 2009 at 12:39 AM
My poet! So talented. Every poem goes straight into my heart that in which brings me life. -Always your Alley
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May 27, 2009 at 10:27 PM
You're so romantic, Jeremiah. You "piece of heaven" inspires you to write beautiful poems.
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May 27, 2009 at 4:15 PM
a piece of heaven---your sweet Alley,thats wonderful isnt it?,you made me smile--bravo--charma
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May 27, 2009 at 8:28 AM
SHE KNOWS THIS JEREMIAH AND SO DONT I ISNT LOVE GREAT ONE DAY I'LL KNOW THIS TOO NICE WRITE LIL BROTHER
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May 27, 2009 at 8:26 AM
aww so sweet, God bless you from diane
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