A Piece of Coal

Pulled from darkness
And into light, born
But a short life was ended
With a quick burn

He was unable to accomplish
Every dream
Life wasn't as 
He made it seem

He called himself 
A piece of coal
And others joined in
Unaware of their toll

Pitch black soul
Or so people thought
But were they just clueless
And untaught

Just because their expectations
He couldn't reach
Didn't mean there wasn't
A diamond underneath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Scholtz Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 5:09 AM
Beautiful write, love Elizabeth
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December 10, 2011 at 1:50 PM
* "I BELIEVE WE ALL HOLD INSTILLED DEEP INSIDE OURSELVES * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL RACHEL * WE JUST NEED TO SEARCH IT OUT * RECOGNIZE * POLISH ITS SHINING AS BRIGHT AS WE MAY * THEN ONE DAY * NOT EVEN THE TREASURES OF THE WORLD * COULD PURCHASE ITS WORTH * SWEET LOVELY HEARTS VERSE * MY LUV * HAPPY HOLIDAYS * FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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