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May be an image of dog

Only picture I can find of him. He was ALWAYS by my side and jumped up into my arms each night when I came home from work.

A Pet Minichu (original title) Dearest Pet Long ago - dearest pet - a miniature cute white Eskimo doggy I would get. Great joy unfurled. A light my doggy came to be - my world! Lots of this he showed me: Love! Long ago - dearest pet - a light my doggy came to be - Love! April 26, 2021 for Mohan Chutani's A Pet Minichu Poetry Contest Checked by Howmanysyllables.com Minichu format: Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of: 1st line of stanza 1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1

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Date: 5/9/2021 5:30:00 AM
Your words are simple but very powerful.
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Date: 4/30/2021 10:52:00 PM
It is no mistake that God and dog have the same letters. Well done Andrea!
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Date: 4/29/2021 10:47:00 PM
Brilliant, Andrea:)
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Date: 4/28/2021 2:33:00 AM
Andrea... I understand how much you loved Ollyver... what a cute picture of him... so sweet.... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 4/27/2021 11:08:00 PM
I know how much you loved him Andrea. He’s awfully sweet looking, and nothing is better than being greeted when you come home. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/27/2021 12:34:00 PM
aww so sweet Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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