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a permanent scar an earthquake crack in pavement.. the broken heart bleeds one name no longer appears in the new poem list... sigh, heart racing gone romantic poems filled a gap in this empty life... would you write love soon?
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Contest: (Double) Valentine Haiku Plus Questionku #2 Written: February 2, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/24/2015 3:30:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2015 9:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 3/22/2015 3:00:00 PM
Hi Sara! So pleased to be back with deserved congratulations!! All the best. // paul
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Date: 3/22/2015 1:45:00 PM
SARA, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2015 6:49:00 AM
You write graciously and wonderfully. Its blissful coming across this piece. There's nothing more than I can say other than, this is simply awesome and great
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Date: 2/5/2015 3:41:00 PM
Another fab poem...best of luck.
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Date: 2/3/2015 3:05:00 PM
oh, sad write here, Sara - very touching indeed
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Date: 2/2/2015 2:05:00 PM
Oh Sara this is oh so touching - I can relate to this my friend - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 2/2/2015 10:16:00 AM
A marvelous display of emotions. Very well done with wonderful feeling and depth. Emile.
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Date: 2/2/2015 10:10:00 AM
Hi Sara! Great haiku/questionku.Loved it."would you write love soon? " simply incredible.Hugs! Rajat
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Date: 2/2/2015 10:08:00 AM
Hi Sara! Wounds heal, but usually the scars remain! All three are lovely. #7 gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:36:00 AM
Great pen Sarah! I really enjoyed your piece. A 7 from me! Have a nice day! Good luck in the contest! :) Love n hugs! xxxx D.""
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:19:00 AM
Nice pen Sara... best for the contest... nad!
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:02:00 AM
Oooh so well done, loved the write and the picture! Hugsxx
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