Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

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A Permanent Scar

a permanent scar
an earthquake crack in pavement..
the broken heart bleeds

one name no longer
appears in the new poem list...
sigh, heart racing gone

romantic poems filled
a gap in this empty life...
would you write love soon?  

Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A
Contest: (Double) Valentine Haiku Plus Questionku #2
Written: February 2, 2015

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Jan Allison March 24, 2015 at 3:30 PM dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) Hugs jan xx

Joseph May March 22, 2015 at 9:41 PM Congrats on your win Sara

Paul Callus March 22, 2015 at 3:00 PM Hi Sara! So pleased to be back with deserved congratulations!! All the best. // paul

Poet Destroyer A March 22, 2015 at 1:45 PM SARA, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA

Funom Makama February 6, 2015 at 6:49 AM You write graciously and wonderfully. Its blissful coming across this piece. There's nothing more than I can say other than, this is simply awesome and great

M. L. Kiser February 5, 2015 at 3:41 PM Another fab poem...best of luck.

Jack Horne February 3, 2015 at 3:05 PM oh, sad write here, Sara - very touching indeed

Jan Allison February 2, 2015 at 2:05 PM Oh Sara this is oh so touching - I can relate to this my friend - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7

Emile Pinet February 2, 2015 at 10:16 AM A marvelous display of emotions. Very well done with wonderful feeling and depth. Emile.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 2, 2015 at 10:10 AM Hi Sara! Great haiku/questionku.Loved it."would you write love soon? " simply incredible.Hugs! Rajat

Paul Callus February 2, 2015 at 10:08 AM Hi Sara! Wounds heal, but usually the scars remain! All three are lovely. #7 gl in the contest. // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter February 2, 2015 at 9:36 AM Great pen Sarah! I really enjoyed your piece. A 7 from me! Have a nice day! Good luck in the contest! :) Love n hugs! xxxx D.""

Poesy Relish February 2, 2015 at 9:19 AM Nice pen Sara... best for the contest... nad!

Casarah Nance February 2, 2015 at 9:02 AM Oooh so well done, loved the write and the picture! Hugsxx