A Period So Pink

Fresh to the world, nothing to think
having all rights to be catered for
with everything to drink
all goodies for it, in one link
and at it love and care constantly wink.
Enjoying a period so pink
lots of affectionate waters without a stink
with many shoulders beneath in case of a sink.
Life’s bustles only watch and blink
b’cos this little one isn’t yet ready
not even in sight of its brink

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/10/2015 7:45:00 PM
Funom, I agree with you. No sight of a brink for many. I feel we are close to a very big cliff, but most are in denial. I really liked this a lot.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 6:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Duke
Date: 7/9/2015 4:12:00 PM
Your capable pen has worked wonders here, Funom! This tribute to a new-born child is lovely and the rhyme is great. WEll done! // paul
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 6:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 10:40:00 AM
What a wonderful write, Makama. You graced the elegance of a newborn so sweetly, I enjoyed the read. ~Caryl
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 6:54:00 AM
Thank you very much Muzzey
Date: 7/8/2015 2:00:00 PM
oh the innocence and total dependency of a baby - what wonderful memories you have brought back of when my son was born:-) hugs jan xx
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 6:53:00 AM
Thank you very much Allison
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