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A Perfect World

In a perfect world, he would be mine Because he is more than just fine He is all I could ever want And none of the things I don’t In a perfect world, our love would be real Because nothing compares to how I feel A yearning that’s way too strong Stirrings that could never be put to song But it’s not a perfect world is it? And it’s only me the love bug bit. So now I’m left with my pain Reality proves there’s nothing to gain Sorrow slowly fills my heart As my fantasy quickly falls apart My tears steadily soak my pillow As I lay here like a weeping willow So I will just drown in my sorrow And hope for a better tomorrow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/16/2016 6:32:00 AM
Saudia,, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/31/2011 5:06:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Saudia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Saudia Hampton
Date: 5/31/2011 6:50:00 AM
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Date: 5/29/2011 12:50:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative poetry .. enjoy the site as u continue to share with luv... our contests are free so check them out ..good luck luv..
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Saudia Hampton
Date: 5/29/2011 1:49:00 PM
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Date: 5/29/2011 10:35:00 AM
Thanks, unfortunately its not even a break-up. I'm in love with a guy who has given up on love and relationships. How sad is that? I don't even know how it happened!
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Date: 5/29/2011 8:37:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Saudia. Hopefully you'll get over the breakup you're going through. Time always finds a way to heal, so do not lose hope. Emilia
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Saudia Hampton
Date: 5/29/2011 1:49:00 PM
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