A Perfect Storm

A perfect storm they had created.
Two lovers destined to be mated.
Living life upon the edge.
Forged in crime, their love was pledged.

Wanted posters with each name. 
Loved and feared, the pair became.
Evading law from state to state.
Alas, this was to be their fate.

Romanticized through history.
Sprinkled with some mystery.
Running, hiding till the end.
Celebrities, some may contend.

The two had once been quite mundane.
They hungered to be free of plain.
And even now they are well-known.
From need and want their seeds were sown.




For Nette Onclaud’s ‘Soul Partners’ contest
Bonnie and Clyde
By Samia Ali Arroyo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 7:56 PM
You chose two great partners to emulate here. I still remember that bonnie and clyde movie from around the 60's or 70's it was awesome, like your poem.
Salama  Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Hey Andrea, I loved that movie too. It definitely inspired me to write this. Thank you very much! :)
Williams Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 8:48 AM
Samia congrats on your win..David
Salama  Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 1:13 PM
Thank you so much David! :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 2:03 PM
Congrats on your win, Samia! A wonderful poem with great flow and rhyme!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Salama  Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 2:06 PM
Hey Rhonda, Thank you so much! Love and blessings to you as well! :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 7:53 AM
This is great Love it Samia Congratulations xx
Salama  Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 9:08 AM
Hey Mandy, Thank you so much for the well wishes! :)
Richards Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 7:43 AM
This is the first one I've read about this infamous pair of lovers..... yes,, they did make a name for themselves, ....perhaps soul partners on the road to fame but not glory!! A great depiction in your poem...well done, Samia!!
Salama  Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Thank you so much Carrie! I do appreciate your comment. Your work is so excellent! :)
Brown Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 7:30 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Soul Partners" contest Samia. Love, Carol
Salama  Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 9:06 AM
Hey Carol, Thank you very much! :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 11:03 PM
nice one, samia.. did you mean, "They hungered to be free of PAIN"... or is it really "plain" which seems to be a typo error??.. you may want to edit?.. otherwise, a fine one.. :) huggs!
Onclaud Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 10:49 AM
ohh.. something like " to be free of things plain?.."
Onclaud Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 10:45 AM
got it.. thanks and huggs!
Salama  Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 7:03 AM
Hi nette, Thank you very much. Actually, it is not a typo. I meant it to be 'free of plain' because they were both bored with their live:) Thank you so much for reading and commenting on it and also bringing that to my attention because it could have been a typo! :)
May Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 8:40 AM
nicely done Samia...winning wishes for the contest..always..Joseph..
Salama  Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:29 AM
Hi Joseph, Thank you so much. I really appreciate it! :)
Horsman Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 5:45 AM
this is so good, Samia, good luck. harry
Salama  Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:29 AM
Hi Harry, Thank you very much! :)
Grisetti Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 3:04 PM
Good choice for the contest - best of luck.
Salama  Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 3:29 PM
Thank you very much Joann! :)
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