A Perfect Painting

bees and birds and breeze,
underneath trees umbrella
...raindrops tickle wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 10:39 PM
Very cute imagery! I used birds and bees in my last poem too!
Falotico Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Very nice Haiku..... great images......Michael
Muzzey Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 11:32 AM
A wonderful Haiku Johnny, full of great images. I enjoyed the read ~ Caryl
Mehta Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 9:26 AM
Lovely visual with meaningful, Johnny
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