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A Perfect Day in May

On a perfect sunny day, gulls play over the bay.
A breakaway to a perfect hideaway went estray.
On the beach water sprays on those that lay in its way.

2/14/2025
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February 18, 2025 at 1:45 PM
Love the words of your poem Eve and the picture is perfect for the poem! Debx
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February 17, 2025 at 10:16 PM
Such a beautiful poem. Have computer problems and I'll probably have to buy a new one And I do not feel very well. Hope you are fine. Hugs.
Brotherton Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 11:13 AM
delightful poem eve. My wife and I were both born in the wonderful month of May.
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 3:15 PM
Very nice one, Eve. May is a wonderful month
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